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Anonymous
8/12/16, 9:05 PM
Who keeps asking for these transformations into someone's dick?! Hahaha.
Jul 4, 2016
Hey!!
8/12/16, 8:32 PM
Omg this is by far one of my most favorite stories on here!!!! I would love to chat some more about it and things of the sort! Do you have an email or a kik!?
Anonymous
8/12/16, 8:06 PM
Looking forward to maybe seeing more confusion or resistance to the mental changes later-- whether with Seth or anyone. The prolonged struggle there is always hot. Also looking forward to imminent the big chubby redheaded lumberjack. Heheh.
cutlerfan
8/12/16, 7:22 PM
I think I see where this is going! Please write/post more! I hope Seth stays gay after all this!
Anonymous
8/12/16, 6:44 PM
Geil one Ende
xORRiNx
8/12/16, 5:07 PM
The second chapter has a lot of that stuff in it! I really want this Cock TF to be grueling for Sam :)
TimNJ
8/12/16, 4:33 PM
I love your stories as well; they're always hot and they go in unexpected directions. I hope there is a sequel dealing with the "concerns" about Caleb that were expressed by Jake's and Donna's Dad. Maybe Jake and Caleb should "explain" it to him
8/12/16, 4:08 PM
I hadn't reread the stories, just noticed that the prequel had never been posted over here so figured I would put it up. Chalk it up to having written the stories a few months apart and not committing every detail of the first to memory. Glad you still enjoyed them despite the flaws.
Null0byte
8/12/16, 3:18 PM
Pretty good story, except for 2 issues: 1. While it's fantastic to imagine a company having that much integrity that they would pay the dude billions of dollars he was rightly entitled to, absolutely no real company would do so. Once they got past the fear of any potential liability issues (which the original story alluded to), they would just shrug their shoulders and go "meh, he's obviously happy where he is, and we can't put his mind back, sucks to be him!" and the greedy dollar signs would turn on. 2. The original story mentioned the fact that the individual at the booth was the inventor, and he didn't exactly come off as dumb. While it *might* be plausible that they corralled Nate into playing the part of inventor, the entire setup comes across as a one-man operation just getting started, not as an established company valued in the billions of dollars and climbing. Having said those things, both stories can really stand in their own light, as being two different takes off the same caption and can easily each go in wildly different directions. All that aside, I loved both! I hope there will be more.
Null0byte
8/12/16, 3:02 PM
Love this story! Loved it on the Male Transformation Blog too! Wish there were more chapters after this one (plan on reading the prequel now)