Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/10/16, 6:24 AM
Love this premise and the way the characters and their stories are developing. I can't wait to see more!
Hypnothrill
8/10/16, 5:33 AM
Thanks for the critique above. Like most authors on here, I write what turns me on, and detailed explanations and descriptions of the body modification process would bore me limp. I've got to say that I'm a little disappointed about the tepid response to this story. I'd been thinking about finishing and posting a few other stories here, but I'm starting to think that my style just isn't a great fit with the tastes of GaySpiral readers.
majorwrll
8/10/16, 4:52 AM
I disagree with the fan. I would love for this story to keep going for a long time. I would though love if it could get an editior. Also it seemed at certain parts the person wishing wasn't the person who was supposed to be wishing.
Anonymous
8/10/16, 3:27 AM
hows chapter 9 coming along?
Anonymous
8/10/16, 2:55 AM
This had so much potential but it was all wasted in the end. Too much repetition of the same shower scene and hardly any detail of either the mind control or the body modification process.
Anonymous
8/10/16, 1:19 AM
Brilliant story, well written!
cutlerfan
8/10/16, 1:04 AM
Please continue this! I have a feeling at least some of the effects are permanent. I really want to see how this turns out! Awesome story!
Anonymous
8/9/16, 8:21 PM
I, too, hope you take them further. It would be fun to have their original personalities return only to find themselves so changed. Love the ap - fantastic imagery.
Anonymous
8/9/16, 8:06 PM
Could be kind of cute and different if Dalton "finds himself" as a big macho chub-bear, in contrast to the catty twink he started as
Anonymous
8/9/16, 7:05 PM
Please don't make us wait another year! This story is so phenomenal! One of if not the best series on this site!