Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/10/16, 2:55 AM
This had so much potential but it was all wasted in the end. Too much repetition of the same shower scene and hardly any detail of either the mind control or the body modification process.
Anonymous
8/10/16, 1:19 AM
Brilliant story, well written!
cutlerfan
8/10/16, 1:04 AM
Please continue this! I have a feeling at least some of the effects are permanent. I really want to see how this turns out! Awesome story!
Anonymous
8/9/16, 8:21 PM
I, too, hope you take them further. It would be fun to have their original personalities return only to find themselves so changed. Love the ap - fantastic imagery.
Anonymous
8/9/16, 8:06 PM
Could be kind of cute and different if Dalton "finds himself" as a big macho chub-bear, in contrast to the catty twink he started as
Anonymous
8/9/16, 7:05 PM
Please don't make us wait another year! This story is so phenomenal! One of if not the best series on this site!
Anonymous
8/9/16, 6:53 PM
Cute how Seth gets more sweet and less bitchy when trying to hold onto himself rather than letting the effects of the drink take hold. When he's full-twink mode he's more of an ass like Dalton has been so far.
Anonymous
8/9/16, 6:48 PM
This is a pretty damn neat TF macguffin, but jeez, Dalton sounds like a total douche.
Anonymous
8/9/16, 5:50 PM
Sure got me stroking. More!
Aug 5, 2016
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
8/9/16, 4:38 PM
Enjoyed the story. Well done.