Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/8/16, 11:18 PM
Dumb skinny punk was a nice surprise! Jeffery staying aware throughout all of this should make for an interesting dynamic, too.
Baralai fan!
8/8/16, 10:30 PM
Okay, Baralai, love your work, but this series is getting old. Seems like a formula anyone can write at this point... Can you return to the House Guest series? Or Praise the Goddess? Weren't those supposed to intertwine? Was looking forward to that plot's continuation.
8/8/16, 9:23 PM
By the way, if you're into such things, I've been posting a bunch of photomanipulated transformation sequences at DeviantArt lately: http://criskane.deviantart.com/ Mostly M2F or F2M, but at least a couple M2Ms that you might enjoy. It's possible I'll create visuals there to go along with some of my stories moving forward.
8/8/16, 9:17 PM
Thanks for the positive feedback so far! It's been quite a while since I've posted. Chapter two is coming soon.
Anonymous
8/8/16, 8:39 PM
Brilliant read can't wait for more!
alx62
8/8/16, 7:39 PM
very nice hope there is more
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:59 PM
Wow what an amazing start! Please don't make us wait long to see what happens next!
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
8/8/16, 5:57 PM
I love this start! Cannot wait for the next part!
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:36 PM
This is a great beginning to your story. I can't wait to read more.
Cliff
8/8/16, 5:32 PM
Glad to see another Cris Kane's new story ! Hope to see the ch2 soon !