Recent Comments

alx62
8/8/16, 7:39 PM
very nice hope there is more
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:59 PM
Wow what an amazing start! Please don't make us wait long to see what happens next!
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
8/8/16, 5:57 PM
I love this start! Cannot wait for the next part!
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:36 PM
This is a great beginning to your story. I can't wait to read more.
Cliff
8/8/16, 5:32 PM
Glad to see another Cris Kane's new story ! Hope to see the ch2 soon !
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:31 PM
Wonderful start, plenty of directions you can take this... especially excited about Seth's tf!
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:14 PM
Excellent premise, this has a lot of potential. Can't wait to see how it plays out.
Aug 5, 2016
Anonymous
8/8/16, 4:31 PM
would be interesting to see the domination of the jocks
Anonymous
8/8/16, 3:07 PM
I love it. We need more stories here about superheroes. I especially love it when the bad guy turns the hero from good to evil. I can't wait to read your followup.
Anonymous
8/8/16, 10:55 AM
Was just in Istanbul and had my first Turkish bath experience. Too bad it wasn't this one.