Recent Comments

shortnlookn@yahoo.com
8/8/16, 5:57 PM
I love this start! Cannot wait for the next part!
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:36 PM
This is a great beginning to your story. I can't wait to read more.
Cliff
8/8/16, 5:32 PM
Glad to see another Cris Kane's new story ! Hope to see the ch2 soon !
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:31 PM
Wonderful start, plenty of directions you can take this... especially excited about Seth's tf!
Anonymous
8/8/16, 5:14 PM
Excellent premise, this has a lot of potential. Can't wait to see how it plays out.
Aug 5, 2016
Anonymous
8/8/16, 4:31 PM
would be interesting to see the domination of the jocks
Anonymous
8/8/16, 3:07 PM
I love it. We need more stories here about superheroes. I especially love it when the bad guy turns the hero from good to evil. I can't wait to read your followup.
Anonymous
8/8/16, 10:55 AM
Was just in Istanbul and had my first Turkish bath experience. Too bad it wasn't this one.
Shortnlookn
8/8/16, 1:47 AM
Love it like the earlier chapters. As for cheating I would make it so that if you try to cheat the roll by say rolling sixes or such then the game creates a new space that you land on. The space would be called "In Charge! : You don't like giving up control and enjoy being in charge of the situation. You gain the card Alpha Dom: You enjoy dominanting other guys physically and making them submit to you. 80pts extra bonus points for Top, Leather, Big Cock, Muscles” I suggest that way because you haven't done a fully dominate Alpha top type yet and it would be a fun way to do it
LanceFan2001
8/8/16, 1:46 AM
Dearest Baralai, This is one of my most favorite series, i loved the fresh take on like a jumanji type game. This chapter was just okay for me this time. It kind of felt mechanical. Kind of like you just filled in the blanks of the story with your "matrix". I still love your work. Thanks for writing, and please keep it up!