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Shortnlookn
8/8/16, 1:47 AM
Love it like the earlier chapters. As for cheating I would make it so that if you try to cheat the roll by say rolling sixes or such then the game creates a new space that you land on. The space would be called "In Charge! : You don't like giving up control and enjoy being in charge of the situation. You gain the card Alpha Dom: You enjoy dominanting other guys physically and making them submit to you. 80pts extra bonus points for Top, Leather, Big Cock, Muscles” I suggest that way because you haven't done a fully dominate Alpha top type yet and it would be a fun way to do it
LanceFan2001
8/8/16, 1:46 AM
Dearest Baralai, This is one of my most favorite series, i loved the fresh take on like a jumanji type game. This chapter was just okay for me this time. It kind of felt mechanical. Kind of like you just filled in the blanks of the story with your "matrix". I still love your work. Thanks for writing, and please keep it up!
Anonymous
8/7/16, 11:21 PM
Would love to see the next muscled/bodybuilder to draw a card that causes their chest to lactate milk. Would be hot to see buff studs being milked like a cow for those milk
Anonymous
8/7/16, 10:41 PM
Well wasn't that fucking sexy! I hope we will be seeing a lot more from you!... Starting with a continuation of this story!
Anonymous
8/7/16, 9:48 PM
Very hot! Can't wait for the next chapter! Here are a few suggestions for cards, if you don't mind: Surfer Dude: You love ridding waves and dudes, [+50pts] [Extra +20pts for every card obtained] Perfect Tan, Adonis Body, Cali Accent (or some other kind of accent card that fits), Tribal Tat, and Long and Luscious. Long and Luscious: Some use Maybelline, you are just born with it. Chubby Chaser: The bigger they are the bigger the lust. Growth Card: Role the die twice, first time for muscle(even) or fat(odd) second time for pounds (number rolled multiplied by 5) Gainer: You love your food and your love handles (gains 30 pounds of fat and has the urge to eat for the turn)
Anonymous
8/7/16, 9:44 PM
Need more daddy related cards in that game. Aging, grey hair, barrel chest, ball gut, that sort of thing, maybe even some fat cards.
Anonymous
8/7/16, 9:44 PM
Delicious!! I hope we get to see how the new Calvin tries to cope with his old life. :)
dfredr18
8/7/16, 9:34 PM
Amazing!
Anonymous
8/7/16, 9:27 PM
Can't wait for Andrew nephew and friends keep bringing the fun
Anonymous
8/7/16, 8:08 PM
Should makw a second part to show how dumb he is now ;3