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Anonymous
8/7/16, 2:30 PM
Really liked this chapter. I personally like how the race stuff often comes into play. Would be cool if some of the people playing started out not-white though. Would love to see a version where instead of four nerdy white guys the game was being played by a bunch of large black men.
lloyd311@gmail.com
8/7/16, 11:55 AM
Wow! I mean, wow...
Kyle
8/7/16, 10:21 AM
Excellent. I wonder if there are any other surprises that came with that gift of hunger. Great job.
Rick
8/7/16, 10:03 AM
Really a great story JW. Looking forward to the sequel. But if I could I'd like to suggest Part two have less wrestling and more mind control? Hydroman's reprogramming was way too quick, so could Aqualad's take a little longer next time? That would make it so much hotter.
Aug 5, 2016
John
8/7/16, 7:13 AM
Really good work! You have a knack! Keep at it and thanks! :)
Anonymous
8/7/16, 7:07 AM
Damn that was hot! 😍😍
Markgraf
8/7/16, 6:57 AM
Thanks for a hot story! You have a great sense of imagination. I am hot just reading. Thanks! :)
GrowingGeek
8/7/16, 6:41 AM
Another amazing chapter - Caleb's transformation is especially hot. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see what's next!
xORRiNx
8/7/16, 6:34 AM
Just.... Extremely hot!!!! 😀😀
Kyle
8/7/16, 6:12 AM
I'm curious what the game would do if someone tried to cheat too. Do they not think about it because they are compelled to play or could they still try out of desperation to escape with as few changes as possible. Loved this addition, great job, mate. So hot, descriptive and exciting. Look forward to the next edition, maybe with Andrew's nephew and how it affects him and his friends.