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Anonymous
8/7/16, 4:46 PM
you gotta keep this going
Anonymous
8/7/16, 3:10 PM
Continuation? Plss this is so hot
Anonymous
8/7/16, 2:30 PM
Really liked this chapter. I personally like how the race stuff often comes into play. Would be cool if some of the people playing started out not-white though. Would love to see a version where instead of four nerdy white guys the game was being played by a bunch of large black men.
lloyd311@gmail.com
8/7/16, 11:55 AM
Wow! I mean, wow...
Kyle
8/7/16, 10:21 AM
Excellent. I wonder if there are any other surprises that came with that gift of hunger. Great job.
Rick
8/7/16, 10:03 AM
Really a great story JW. Looking forward to the sequel. But if I could I'd like to suggest Part two have less wrestling and more mind control? Hydroman's reprogramming was way too quick, so could Aqualad's take a little longer next time? That would make it so much hotter.
Aug 5, 2016
John
8/7/16, 7:13 AM
Really good work! You have a knack! Keep at it and thanks! :)
Anonymous
8/7/16, 7:07 AM
Damn that was hot! 😍😍
Markgraf
8/7/16, 6:57 AM
Thanks for a hot story! You have a great sense of imagination. I am hot just reading. Thanks! :)
GrowingGeek
8/7/16, 6:41 AM
Another amazing chapter - Caleb's transformation is especially hot. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see what's next!