Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/3/16, 3:26 PM
Where is this going? I'm intrigued.
Anonymous
8/3/16, 3:17 PM
Great story! Loved it!!
Xmale06
8/3/16, 9:36 AM
Man it's sooooo interesting how this seems to develop!!!! Love your work boy
Anonymous
8/3/16, 5:05 AM
I hope this is not the end of this story, It would be nice for Derek to find out what happened to Daniel and the rest of the teams and save them.
8/2/16, 9:19 PM
Just lovely. An eventual threesome between Tyler, Brandon and a bimbo du jour would be nice. :-)
8/2/16, 8:45 PM
I liked this a lot, but IMHO it could have used more description of the massage itself.
Anonymous
8/2/16, 6:35 PM
hope to see more from you!
Anonymous
8/2/16, 6:19 PM
Love it. Can't wait for more.
Hypnothrill
8/2/16, 6:06 PM
Author here--for me, too much exposition can quickly kill the erotic atmosphere and tension of an MC story. If you read each part closely, you'll get some idea of how the mind control is happening and why it's happening, but it's all relatively subtle. The story's not being told from the controller's POV.
8/2/16, 5:17 PM
I liked this scenario. Would have liked a little more explanation of the mind control processes though. Looking forward to the next part to see his things develop.