Recent Comments

Hypnothrill
8/2/16, 6:06 PM
Author here--for me, too much exposition can quickly kill the erotic atmosphere and tension of an MC story. If you read each part closely, you'll get some idea of how the mind control is happening and why it's happening, but it's all relatively subtle. The story's not being told from the controller's POV.
8/2/16, 5:17 PM
I liked this scenario. Would have liked a little more explanation of the mind control processes though. Looking forward to the next part to see his things develop.
Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/2/16, 3:00 PM
Dave, the puny master, should start going to the gym with Alex and bulk up. Then, we learn that Alex has actually reprogrammed Dave.
Anonymous
8/2/16, 2:51 PM
Great story! Loved it!
Anonymous
8/2/16, 2:42 PM
This was different for you. Interesting plot twists, but I just don't know.
Anonymous
8/2/16, 12:39 PM
Cool start! Couldn't wait for more!
Anonymous
8/2/16, 10:51 AM
Nasty!! It made me cum lol :P
Anonymous
8/2/16, 9:51 AM
This is cool!
Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/2/16, 7:19 AM
Thanks for the positive feedback guys. I have an idea to continue the story, although it's not in the 'daddy' direction. But neither is it 'Dave recruits more men into his harem.'