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Aug 1, 2016
UchihaDEMS
8/2/16, 1:37 AM
Not bad~ A daddy for victim would be awesome.
Anton
8/2/16, 12:11 AM
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Anonymous
8/1/16, 11:52 PM
Love the how the narrator's pride is thwarted in this series, and this chapter in particular -- the moment when he wonders why he's not been brainwashed like the others must have been. Mmm-mmm
GrowingGeek
8/1/16, 10:28 PM
I absolutely loved this story, great work! These two boys sound like a walking wet dream
A CONCERNED READER
8/1/16, 9:07 PM
GLAD I'M NOT THE ONLY READER WHO THINKS A LITTLE 'HOMOPHOBIC' ATTITUDE ON HIS PART WOULD ONLY ADD TO THIS STORY.....
A San Francisco Reader
8/1/16, 9:02 PM
Your stories are always so well written, but how about making him less aware of his changes in behavior..It was a nice touch when he started making a mess while pissing, but it was slightly spoiled when he tried to clean it up..Would have been better if he no longer even noticed, [same with the other changes]..Like his new vocabulary, give him lots of 'Dude's' & 'Bro's' & throw in a few more 'fuck's' while your at it....
Anonymous
8/1/16, 6:59 PM
Dear concerned reader honestly that does sound like a good story but that is not where this story is going in guessing. If this story is not what you want then don't read it and write the story you want to read
Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/1/16, 6:30 PM
This should definitely be continued
Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/1/16, 5:54 PM
Please continue this! How about a muscle daddy for a change? That would be great!
Lenny
8/1/16, 2:00 PM
This story really is hot. Love to read more.