Recent Comments

A San Francisco Reader
8/1/16, 9:02 PM
Your stories are always so well written, but how about making him less aware of his changes in behavior..It was a nice touch when he started making a mess while pissing, but it was slightly spoiled when he tried to clean it up..Would have been better if he no longer even noticed, [same with the other changes]..Like his new vocabulary, give him lots of 'Dude's' & 'Bro's' & throw in a few more 'fuck's' while your at it....
Anonymous
8/1/16, 6:59 PM
Dear concerned reader honestly that does sound like a good story but that is not where this story is going in guessing. If this story is not what you want then don't read it and write the story you want to read
Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/1/16, 6:30 PM
This should definitely be continued
Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/1/16, 5:54 PM
Please continue this! How about a muscle daddy for a change? That would be great!
Lenny
8/1/16, 2:00 PM
This story really is hot. Love to read more.
Anonymous
8/1/16, 5:29 AM
Love it. Always coming to this site waiting for updates from you. Love slow progression and the fighting. Will sign up on patreon soon (sigh, hate joining new sites).
Anonymous
8/1/16, 3:16 AM
The link works. Try it. I just did.
Anonymous
8/1/16, 12:59 AM
Wow. Loving it. Can hardly wait for the climax
Anonymous
8/1/16, 12:43 AM
I agree. You did such an awesome job picking out a picture for the first part that I'd really like to see the picture that influenced your second part too.
Taros
8/1/16, 12:26 AM
Too much repetition of the same scene and dialogue