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Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/2/16, 7:19 AM
Thanks for the positive feedback guys. I have an idea to continue the story, although it's not in the 'daddy' direction. But neither is it 'Dave recruits more men into his harem.'
Anonymous
8/2/16, 3:02 AM
Amazing growth sequences! What happens now?
xORRiNx
8/2/16, 2:19 AM
I intend for this to be a longgggg series. EVENTUALLY he will not be aware of his changes. I may add in some homophobia but I really want to focus on general behavior and the body. Slow and cruel. That's my style :)
Anonymous
8/2/16, 2:12 AM
The rapid changing from 1st to 3rd person made this very hard to read - especially with so many characters - after the promise of the first two chapters,
Aug 1, 2016
Anonymous
8/2/16, 1:48 AM
I agree not bad at all If our writer is kind enough I'd like to see this theme continued I must also agree a dad type would be hot Something you see in gym and want
Aug 1, 2016
UchihaDEMS
8/2/16, 1:37 AM
Not bad~ A daddy for victim would be awesome.
Anton
8/2/16, 12:11 AM
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Anonymous
8/1/16, 11:52 PM
Love the how the narrator's pride is thwarted in this series, and this chapter in particular -- the moment when he wonders why he's not been brainwashed like the others must have been. Mmm-mmm
GrowingGeek
8/1/16, 10:28 PM
I absolutely loved this story, great work! These two boys sound like a walking wet dream