Recent Comments

7/18/24, 8:12 PM
That's four "wholesome"s now. You guys are totally ruining my reputation! :rofl: Or at least you will once the authors are revealed. But seriously, this story arose out of a few different discussions about consent and realistic portrayals of hypnosis, so I thought I'd give those a go for a change. I'm glad to hear that so many people are enjoying what I've come up with.

8/14/24, 11:40 PM
@[RobinHood70](/user/show/24261) well your more realistic portrayals are very entertaining and I can't wait for the next part(s) :DDD

8/17/24, 3:57 AM
@[RobinHood70](/user/show/24261) Sensible discussion of consent and boundaries as well as a more realistic portrayal of hypnosis is so rare in stories here that I think it is often perceived as wholesome when they do crop up as themes. That said, I think there are actually wholesome and romantic elements to the story. Zach and Scott's relationship appears to be a genuinely caring one so far and I really hope that holds true in the future chapters and will extend to Ben as well. It'll be interesting to see what aspects of submission Ben chooses to pursue with Scott, and how his and Zach's programming differs. Though seeing what common training both boys get is an equally exciting idea, I see another copy of the kink training file is Ben's future XD Now that the challenge is over I'm eagerly awaiting the the next update.

8/18/24, 12:26 AM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Well, let's just say that there's another hypnosis file coming in the very near future for Ben, but not the one you're expecting. The one you're expecting will follow soon enough, however. :) And yes, Zach and Scott's relationship is indeed genuinely caring, more so than has already been revealed. For more on that, you'll have to keep reading. Thanks to chronic illness, I can't promise when the next chapter will be out, but I am working on it.

8/19/24, 12:24 AM
@[RobinHood70](/user/show/24261) Take your time dude, you got this! you can always post updates if you feel like u need to.

8/23/24, 4:02 PM
@[RobinHood70](/user/show/24261) Well now my curiosities really are peaked. Assuming it'll be different from the files Ben has already experienced, I wonder what Scott has in mind for his new boy's first file. Also cant wait to see how well both boys take it when Ben gets reintroduced to their sex file. Very glad to hear their relationship is genuine. Nothing makes me sadder then when a relationship in a story appears wholesome at first only to take a dark turn. Sorry didnt mean for that to come off like I was trying to hurry the next chapter up. Personal health should always take priority over pandering to the demands of your fans.
8/23/24, 3:08 PM
Hope this continues
8/23/24, 1:10 PM
Really cool story! Really like the concept of sense-based stories. I suspect Hank's story will be a smell-lacking one!😉 The hints of something bigger at play and the mix between the predators being, well... predators, and there still having dome redeeming traits for most of them, is interesting.
8/22/24, 10:38 PM
Love when human men turn into hot orcs. Can't wait for more men to join the tribe. I would gladly surrender and join if I could.

8/23/24, 1:09 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Haha me too! I don't think I would be putting up any resistance! Thanks for reading!
Anonymous
8/23/24, 1:09 PM
Oh damn 😳
8/22/24, 10:10 PM
welcome back, those are some hot orcs and a new series, that was great

8/23/24, 1:09 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thanks :) Glad you liked it. Thought I'd try something different!
8/23/24, 1:03 PM
Jack, I'm hooked. Just waiting for more! You never disappoint
8/23/24, 12:36 PM
Absolutely love this story. I would love if there was more.
Zander
8/23/24, 9:40 AM
I hope the sequel will come out soon, I won't have to wait long. I hope the story will be continued and brought to its logical conclusion.
8/23/24, 4:54 AM
Fuc mate, continue the next story transformation of skinhead Jimbo boi !