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Anonymous
7/19/16, 6:01 PM
the twist at the end made it satisfying
alx62
7/19/16, 5:21 PM
yes please Lord and Master me next
Anonymous
7/19/16, 3:23 PM
So glad you are continuing with this :) Wonderful new story.
Anonymous
7/19/16, 3:09 PM
A lot of possibilities here. Could be a very hot start!! Here's to hoping for more to follow.....
sprsizeme@yahoo.com
7/19/16, 1:29 PM
who wrote this I love the story
7/19/16, 1:26 PM
Wah! How horrible! Super endowed, and super buff. Where's the Tamarind Wine?!
Anonymous
7/19/16, 9:43 AM
This could go all kinds of awesome places, bro
7/19/16, 5:50 AM
Not in this story, no. It toes the line, but never crosses it. If you're interested in incest, Web of Trust has a Dad/son chapter and a brother/brother chapter out, with another Dad/son chapter on the way.
TimNJ
7/19/16, 4:34 AM
Intriguing and very hot! Definitely the best "first chapter" I have read in a long time. Really looking forward to the next installment!
Anonymous
7/19/16, 4:05 AM
Great story! I'd like a card with cowboy boots fetish, or a transformation into a horny muscled and handsome cowboy. Your readers are making a lot of good suggestions! my votes goes to the redneck transformation, that's a great idea. By the way, what happened with the last chapter of "How to Take Down a Super Hero"? Please, Baralai, don't let that series without a conclusion! Is a great story, and it deserves an ending. My favourite characters are Hardcore and Frost, and I love what you did with them in the last chapters.