Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/16/16, 9:13 PM
I hope you write a long scene in the police station! I'm curious about how the Officer Bill looks like. Would be cool if Alex turns a very manly cop (maybe the chief) into a wimpy whinny sissy, a nice polite man into a dirty talking slut, or even if he transforms his brother Matt into a limp-wristed sissy (with Sara becoming a Fag hag, instead of his girlfriend). I love when Alex changes the name of people for ridiculous whore names. Cockforbrains, Jizzson, Kneelsfordick... man, I love those names! Is even better when they use their new names in front of others, and how they see themselves as losers obsessed with cocks. In my opinion, Bradley could have been used for something more than a coat rack. That big cock deserves a better use!
Anonymous
7/16/16, 8:37 PM
What happened with the third chapter? I'm dying to know what happens next!
Anonymous
7/16/16, 8:35 PM
I like how you describe the conflicting feelings of Jared and Sean. I really enjoy the descriptions and confusion of the characters. I wonder if Cedric will make them more effeminate or depraved in future chapters. I would like to see them acting less manlier.
Anonymous
7/16/16, 5:18 PM
Love It. Great start! Can't wait for the rest. Really enjoyed this
Anonymous
7/16/16, 4:57 PM
One of your best stories willie, can't wait for more
Anonymous
7/16/16, 4:05 PM
More! Wish Cedric will take over them completely!
Jun 21, 2007
Anonymous
7/16/16, 3:58 PM
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Anonymous
7/16/16, 3:48 PM
isnt this a line from dota's witch doctor
Anonymous
7/16/16, 12:09 PM
Awesome!
Anonymous
7/16/16, 7:16 AM
The prequel idea is great. But I'd love to see what transpires when Jay brings Collin, then Aaron into Bernie's for a visit!