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8/21/24, 8:39 PM
Would have loved a tickle element, but this was great!
Jul 11, 2024
8/21/24, 8:15 PM
another brilliant story
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8/21/24, 7:47 PM
Yep, Alex is screwed. The writing is amazing and the premise is terrifying yet captivating. I really really hope that there's going to be a good ending and that Alex is going to get justice. I admit that if things will continue to go bad with no true hope in sight I'll probably stop reading, but I must stress that this is due to my own personal taste and nothing more. It's your story and you should write whatever floats your boat. Good luck!
8/21/24, 7:17 PM
You don’t miss!

8/21/24, 7:46 PM
@[jealousmoment](/user/show/10007400) Too kind! Thank you.
8/21/24, 6:02 PM
Soooo good. I love how you show him struggling with it but then giving In. It makes the payoff better that way. And the sex scenes are soooo hot 🔥🔥
8/21/24, 5:42 PM
Definitely wouldn’t mind if this happened to me
8/21/24, 3:26 PM
I love the telenovela-tier ending, the only thing missing was someone gasping in a fantasy language similar to Spanish. The worldbuilding on this is really well-thought!
8/21/24, 3:23 PM
Well, I've never found orcs hot. Never really been my thing. You somehow just changed that. Really nicely done.
8/21/24, 2:50 PM
Really like your story, wish this would have a dark turn like his boyfriend being abused or even stolen as retribution to his personal desires. Just a suggestion
8/21/24, 8:23 AM
I will miss everyone know me haha

8/21/24, 2:01 PM
@[cccallum](/user/show/918341) Yeah, I debated on keeping it. But there are so many effects to keep track of as it is…