Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/12/16, 10:54 AM
Very nice start, I can't wait to read future chapters And how the changes from the curse take control of him
screamingmoist
7/12/16, 2:05 AM
Just posted the final part. Thanks for reading and glad people are enjoying it!
Anonymous
7/12/16, 1:58 AM
Great story so far. Looking forward to the second part
Anonymous
7/11/16, 11:48 PM
iT'S SO DISTURBING THAT IT'S EVEN HOTTER . . . i CAN'T EXPLAIN IT, BUT I'M AS HARD AS DIAMONDS, READING THIS STORY. I'VE GOT TO READ SOME PREVIOUS CHAPTERS, OR EVEN RE-READ THIS ONE!!
7/11/16, 11:11 PM
Agreed, i can't wait for more
Anonymous
7/11/16, 10:06 PM
I noticed that this story is somewhat similar to this one (https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/8341 ). In fact while a different author/pen name is used, the email address on both stories are the same. This story (and the other one) has good concepts, but I agree that it is hard to read due to the grammar, punctuation, and syntax issues. Don't be discouraged, but a little more polish/time correcting a few things can make a good story an even better one.
NYPup2Train
7/11/16, 7:35 PM
Mmm, so damn hot... love that they gave Jeremiah a choice how much they changed him, and REALLY love that he wanted it bad enough to go all the way and gave in to being stoopid and horny for his bro. Would be so hot if I could get a bottle of that formula, and find a hot top to do the thinking and pimp me out to guys to pay our bills. What a hot life, to feel so good all the time and have nothing left inside my stoopid, stoopid mind.
7/11/16, 3:58 PM
The two personality in one body is an interesting concept for MC stories. Besides the wonderful beast/Giant transformation, I'd like to know more about how the new acquired magic influence Storm.
7/11/16, 3:54 PM
So glad to see the series continued. The best parts I thought were the slow transformation and vivid descriptions about glory of men. Hope there's more in the near future!
7/11/16, 3:51 PM
I really like Kevin's illogical but sincerely devotion, and glad to see there's one time Peter felt off-balance. “When you stare into the abyss the abyss stares back at you.”, I guess sometimes MC is the same way, who said the hypnotist would always be the one who control? BTW, does Peter find all the tenant he want?