Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/10/16, 2:58 AM
The story was difficult to read due to poor grammar, syntax and missing punctuation; but I like the rubber drone and rubber blob alien aspects of the story.
Anonymous
7/10/16, 2:38 AM
Amazing.
Anonymous
7/9/16, 11:40 PM
Amazing
Jul 4, 2016
screamingmoist
7/9/16, 10:39 PM
Glad you enjoyed it! Also glad there's a market for this sort of TF because I also don't come across a lot of it.
Anonymous
7/9/16, 10:24 PM
Good start...love the domination.
7/9/16, 10:12 PM
Sorry, one of my proofreaders had a bit of a delay. I'm just about to post Chapter 7, after discussing a few specifics with the site owner. Chapter 8 will be posted as soon as I confirm that Chapter 7 conforms to what we discussed.
Anonymous
7/9/16, 8:41 PM
i like the idea behind it and i am usually not very picky with grammar, but this was a mess to read
7/9/16, 8:33 PM
I actually feel like I have to thank you for this comment, lol. I think a good story has to have some give and take and should make you feel...even if it is an erotic gay mind control story. How can you care about what's going to happen if you don't even care about the characters? Even if what is happening is just cock sucking and mind control? That makes me feel great about my writing that you feel that way. I can only hope it doesn't make most people stop reading...because I still have plans for these people that I hope will satisfy as many people as it can.
slave499508824
7/9/16, 8:14 PM
Great story can't wait for the next chapter would love to be a rubber alien.
Anonymous
7/9/16, 5:46 PM
Holy this was hot.