Recent Comments

Charles
7/7/16, 8:02 PM
Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate the feedback.
Txz
7/7/16, 7:46 PM
Have to admit, as much as I like and look forward to your stories, the length of this one made we loose interest. Got a little confusing and tedious. Breaking it up would have helped.
Anonymous
7/7/16, 5:58 PM
For me breaking them up helps with story. It often helps build the anticipation of the outcome
screamingmoist
7/7/16, 5:23 PM
Thanks for reading! This one went a little longer than anticipated. Which leads me to ask: for stories of this length, is it better to break into shorter chapters or post as a whole? Went back and forth on that.
Ken
7/7/16, 5:02 PM
LOVED it. Would be neat to continue on with another group or even to see where everything is going with this group. Or even combine groups to see what happens. Can't wait for more of your stories..It was just GREAT!!!
Anonymous
7/7/16, 3:32 PM
Great story Still stuck on whose transformation I liked better
Steve
7/7/16, 10:30 AM
I don't care for dumbing down stories as a rule because they feel evil mostly BUT this one was hot. I'm always up for revenge or karma chapters where the innocent victim gets theirs in the end!
Gaymer
7/7/16, 8:34 AM
A long-time favorite of mine. Looking forward to seeing anything you want to add to it!
Ruffcub
7/7/16, 7:29 AM
Wow, that was really hot. Good work bro!
Storyteller/ soujiru
7/7/16, 5:30 AM
@Sieg: Thanks a lot for the advices. I don't really know what "MS word" is (I guess it's a computer program or something like that), but the google docs thing I do know it, and I am really thankfull for the tip I really didn't think about it :) I'm sorry but it would be quite hard for me to have a friend proofread my works as... let's just say it's complicated. But I will try to follow your advices (I really liked all of your stories), funny thing is... I'm like a person with Broca's afasia. As I said before my main lenguage is spanish so, at least for me, it's quite hard knowing for sure if what I'm writing is done right but I will try my best. Hope you enjoy the next chapter :3