Recent Comments

Sieg
7/7/16, 4:24 AM
Great work! I enjoyed the need to risk everything for a good time! ;) I wouldn't say form was pathetic, just jarring so it took away from the story a bit. If you don't have MS Word, and don't feel like doling out the cash for it, you can use google docs to spell/grammar check and save your story for editing. Also one tip I've always used just to try and catch mistakes is either have a friend proofread, or wait a day after you're done and read it as if it's the first time to catch the mistakes.
Phineas
7/7/16, 4:10 AM
Great story! Interesting and well written. Great character development. Very well thought out!
Jul 4, 2016
Anonymous
7/7/16, 4:09 AM
This was awesome. Keep going!!
Anonymous
7/7/16, 4:08 AM
Substance was great. Want to see where this story leads. Form was pathetic. If you drafting using MSWord, run the Spelling/Grammar check. It'll help you immensely. There were parts that were hard to read and the poor spelling, annoying. Writing and getting your ideas down is the easy part. Editing is the pain in the ass. A good writer does both.
OU812
7/7/16, 4:08 AM
I loved this story! It was long, well written, and I was really concerned about Tony, then I came to the realization that a muscular, hairy, male stripper is really hot!
Anonymous
7/7/16, 3:26 AM
Really amazing!
cutlerfan
7/6/16, 11:54 PM
Involuntary change stories sometimes go very bad but I like the way this one turned out. Most of the guys are kind of happy and they have adapted to their new lives. Some bad habits were changed too. Thanks for sharing.
Anonymous
7/6/16, 10:24 PM
Probably one of the best I've seen you write Willie. Hopefully this continues down the same path.
Willie Cici
7/6/16, 9:54 PM
Here's a great example of "You never know . . ." I wrote this story. There are other stories I have written that are better, and yet, did not garner favorable support, ratings, etc. The favorable responses to this story surprise me. I did not envision this story as anything more than a one-chapter story. Apparently, I was wrong. Thanks for the comments. I have opined on prior comment sections that I value the favorable and the not-so-favorable comments. They keep me and the other writers grounded and in tune. Thanks. As for additional chapters, let me work on that and see what I can develop.
7/6/16, 6:51 PM
Now you understand Fashaad's frustration.