Recent Comments

Jul 4, 2016
Anonymous
7/5/16, 1:17 AM
I enjoyed this concept very much It was different to say the least I agree with San Fransisco that leaving the face masculine kinda drops the ball Would definitely love to see Steve pay for face to join rest of Dane and his/her new body But the clit peepee must stay
7/5/16, 12:34 AM
I liked the slow pace at the beginning! Made me wonder where the rabbit hole was leading!
Jul 4, 2016
7/5/16, 12:29 AM
This is a well written story, more scary than anything written by Lovecraft.  This had me more scared than Cthulu!
Jul 4, 2016
Anonymous
7/4/16, 11:39 PM
Love the giddy, uncaring (despite awareness) stupor he slips into at the end.
Jul 4, 2016
Anonymous
7/4/16, 11:11 PM
Pretty fascinating twist on a theme that I've looked for a story like this one. Thanks.
Jul 4, 2016
A San Francisco Reader
7/4/16, 10:46 PM
An interesting story, but I really couldn't get into the ending, when Dane still has a male head on his now female body. This makes him too much of a freak....Should have a second chapter where the company completes the head, making him at least look like a women, even if he keeps his now extra tiny 'clit-sized' pee pee.
Jul 4, 2016
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
7/4/16, 10:20 PM
I loved it! Not many feminization stories of this level of change here so I'm glad to see something like this. I hope it gets positive comments so we see more like this.
Anonymous
7/4/16, 12:43 PM
I get the feeling this series is under appreciated, but I thought this was the best chapter yet, a very unique twist on mind control.
Anonymous
7/4/16, 7:44 AM
As someone who LOVES seeing skinnier guys fucking muscle studs this hit ALL the right buttons for me. The only thing I would add is hopefully someone will take advantage of those massive pecs if they get them.
Kyle
7/4/16, 7:09 AM
Wonderful. Really enjoyed this and hope to see more of your imagination on the page. Congratulations.