Recent Comments

Jul 4, 2016
Anonymous
7/4/16, 11:11 PM
Pretty fascinating twist on a theme that I've looked for a story like this one. Thanks.
Jul 4, 2016
A San Francisco Reader
7/4/16, 10:46 PM
An interesting story, but I really couldn't get into the ending, when Dane still has a male head on his now female body. This makes him too much of a freak....Should have a second chapter where the company completes the head, making him at least look like a women, even if he keeps his now extra tiny 'clit-sized' pee pee.
Jul 4, 2016
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
7/4/16, 10:20 PM
I loved it! Not many feminization stories of this level of change here so I'm glad to see something like this. I hope it gets positive comments so we see more like this.
Anonymous
7/4/16, 12:43 PM
I get the feeling this series is under appreciated, but I thought this was the best chapter yet, a very unique twist on mind control.
Anonymous
7/4/16, 7:44 AM
As someone who LOVES seeing skinnier guys fucking muscle studs this hit ALL the right buttons for me. The only thing I would add is hopefully someone will take advantage of those massive pecs if they get them.
Kyle
7/4/16, 7:09 AM
Wonderful. Really enjoyed this and hope to see more of your imagination on the page. Congratulations.
Anonymous
7/4/16, 6:47 AM
My god that story is hot....but it is sad that this dad hate his son that much...You did'nt say in your story but his son must have done something terrible to be hated like that...
Anonymous
7/4/16, 6:34 AM
My god you are a true writer...
May 20, 2013
Anonymous
7/3/16, 11:45 PM
So hot, love how gradual it is and how he gets trapped in the musk and it makes him dumber