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Anonymous
7/3/16, 11:54 AM
Awesome story; loved Storm's "spirit journey" and the xforms.
Anonymous
7/3/16, 11:32 AM
Love this story. Love an arrogant guy to be destroyed. Hope he does not get too too big in a non human way. Also would like to see him bottom...... oooh so many ways this story could develop..... hope we don't have to wait too long until next chapter. Thanks for sharing!!!!
7/3/16, 10:03 AM
This looks like the beginning of a fun ride.
pyro
7/3/16, 9:39 AM
sequels please!!!
Anonymous
7/3/16, 9:25 AM
Oh man. Wow. Wow. One of best stories ever. The details are amazing. Cant wait for next part. Hope is very soon?
Anonymous
7/3/16, 8:26 AM
LOVED IT!!!
Anonymous
7/3/16, 8:13 AM
Oh my goshhh please continue!!!!
7/3/16, 8:08 AM
I liked this. It's well written and the Pigpen seems worth a story or two more, but surprisingly the thing I liked most was the game between the two friends. A very nice detail.
7/3/16, 8:04 AM
Excellent as usual. I loved the exchange: “I’m sure if we were actually gay then the weird stuff would have more effect on us. It can only change our appearance, not us.” “Makes sense,” Trevor said. Denial, the famous river in Egypt.
7/3/16, 8:02 AM
This was fun and evil. It did leave me craving Jeremiah's sweet and fizzy revenge though. :-)