Recent Comments

7/3/16, 4:01 AM
Hmm, very amusing. I'll enjoy seeing where this continues to go. ;)
huttonguy
7/3/16, 1:49 AM
just love the way your imagination takes me always look frward to your stories
Anonymous
7/2/16, 10:23 PM
Card Ideas: Father Figure--You might not have any kids, but you'll always be someone's Daddy--ages up and masculinizes the player Some Like It Sloppy--You might be a slob, but you're still getting it--turns the player in a sex-driven slob, but causes all others around him to be strangely attracted to him Bacchus Body--You enjoy ALL the pleasures in life and your body shows it--Makes the user chubby/fat Doubling Down--Now you're doubled down their--Gives the user a second dick
montag3451
7/2/16, 9:17 PM
I love the fizzing sound, it reminded me of your toothpaste story, which I still wouldn't mind a sequel too. I don't have hang ups about whether a character deserves what he gets, as long as he's enjoying it. I do agree about the permanence of the transformation, is it permanent? I think it's would be hot for it to wear off, maybe he gets some to most of his intelligence back but craves to be horny and stupid. Whatever you come up with I'm sure to love. Can't wait for more. also I do like an addiction aspect to stories, I liked that in toothpaste, his head felt like it filled with bubbles.
7/2/16, 8:38 PM
I love you too!!!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 8:13 PM
I love you, EdIam!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 6:05 PM
Holy cow this was a hot story. I couldn't get thru half without cumming & loved the humiliation/domination aspect. Hope there will be more!!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 3:17 PM
Loved the way he had some choice as to how far he would take it - then gave in to the signals he was getting from his balls. I guess (purely a personal take on the situation) that I'm uncomfortable with the permanence of such a transformation when there's nothing to suggest he deserved it. But you've portrayed it as irreversible - though only in the older brother's opinion, so I guess it could unexpectedly wear off, or an antidote could be created by some as yet unknown good guy. Or things could take a darker turn, with the older brother coming to grief somehow. But it's your call obviously - looking forward to seeing how it goes!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 1:57 PM
Definitely my favorite story on the site right now!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 10:08 AM
I'm allowed to read a story, dislike it, and post my dislike of it here. Everyone is. It's what a comment section's for. I even wrote in my own comment above, "Hey I really like this, I really dislike the gay-to-straight aspect." That's a valid comment to make. It's not whining, or "hating," for God's sakes, it's critique. Maybe straight-to-gay stuff shouldn't be posted here, and better left to Patreon. It's obviously not the right audience for this site. Or maybe the author handled it badly? It's not the site's, the comment section's, or any commentator's fault if it gets under his skin. We don't need people crying about the comments being mean, or the author crying about how he'll quit. Mods will take care of anyone being too big of an asshole and just saying the equivalent of "this sucks kill yourself lol" and dumb shit like that. Also, fuck "community moderation" of comments. Upvote and downvote systems are cancerous everywhere, thank you. Let the mods do their job, they're not incompetent.