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Anonymous
7/2/16, 7:25 AM
Continue it, please
Ragnarok
7/2/16, 6:56 AM
Awesome. Loved it as much as the first, which I don't say often with sequels. lol. Please write a third chapter and soon. :)
EJG
7/2/16, 6:47 AM
Great story. I'm in the rare camp of "LET BAD BOYS (Alex,JJ) WIN",departing from the usual stories here,end where the good guy(s) triumph. I guess it's because i'm a secret masochist.? My personal pervert desires,or what if's..? Alex caught wind of Professor Simon's machine through Jake's/maybe Eric,accidentally letting it slip. 1) Alex takes control of the Prof before we head to that "Simon Says" scenario 2) Alex & JJ add a few thugs to even out the faggot-Alpha ratio. His brothers perhaps.Maybe the one who ONCE was a rebel.? Gang going around harassing the neighbourhood. 3) I wonder what the Prof's device can do.. Alter physical appearances..? Alex with a bit more beef Thes are just MY thoughts,nothing to influence or put off the author. But Edlam,whatever scenario u write,and how you describe it,is freaking hot.
xORRiNx
7/2/16, 3:52 AM
Indeed :) I haven't decided if I want to continue with it yet though!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 3:45 AM
Your ending suggest that he will slowly become a fat gay slob with a tiny dick... Am I correct ? His dick is now smaller at 8 inchs
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:51 AM
Wow! Great job!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:29 AM
It would be nice if this series can be concluded
Tox
7/2/16, 1:05 AM
I agree, very well written and I loved it all the way through. I also admit that I'm a fan of ViVe's Dumbing Down series, I was digging the parallel to that (at least how I took it ^_^).
Anonymous
7/2/16, 12:49 AM
love the story...looking forward to what is in your mind
MicroModal
7/1/16, 9:28 PM
LOVING this story line. Please keep it going in the same positive tone. It's fine for the changes to make Tom hotter and hornier, but to this point I feel like I want to experience what Tom's going thru, don't change that! :-)