Recent Comments

xORRiNx
7/1/16, 7:14 PM
This is written well! I very much enjoyed the gradual dumb-down and the gradual increase in horniness. :)
Sieg
7/1/16, 7:01 PM
I'm just glad I could make a few people happy with my story! Was my first attempt, so I love hearing feedback!
7/1/16, 6:18 PM
Really enjoyed both chapters of your story so far. The whole "out of sight, out of mind" side effect of the lamp is interesting and well done. It opens up a lot of different things you can do with the plot, if you are so inclined.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 5:28 PM
Good job Orrin Brody has a good dad
Anonymous
7/1/16, 4:18 PM
you're the best
Anonymous
7/1/16, 3:07 PM
Wow, if this artist can barely handle critique, he shouldn't be an artist! The story was great though, and very well written. It also did...appeal to the imagination.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 2:59 PM
Wow, amazing story! Well-written and super hot! Always good to see body swap stuff on here, please write more stories!
Anonymous
7/1/16, 2:58 PM
Very nice. Love it
BadDirtyTrickster
7/1/16, 2:17 PM
Thank you all for the good feedback. Much appreciated, really! Cheers!!!!
7/1/16, 12:48 PM
Thank you so much. Was worth the wait