Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/2/16, 3:45 AM
Your ending suggest that he will slowly become a fat gay slob with a tiny dick... Am I correct ? His dick is now smaller at 8 inchs
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:51 AM
Wow! Great job!
Anonymous
7/2/16, 2:29 AM
It would be nice if this series can be concluded
Tox
7/2/16, 1:05 AM
I agree, very well written and I loved it all the way through. I also admit that I'm a fan of ViVe's Dumbing Down series, I was digging the parallel to that (at least how I took it ^_^).
Anonymous
7/2/16, 12:49 AM
love the story...looking forward to what is in your mind
MicroModal
7/1/16, 9:28 PM
LOVING this story line. Please keep it going in the same positive tone. It's fine for the changes to make Tom hotter and hornier, but to this point I feel like I want to experience what Tom's going thru, don't change that! :-)
BadDirtyTrickster
7/1/16, 8:50 PM
I don't understand why someone sees no problem in straight-to-gay stories but balk at gay-to-straight ones. For me, what gets me off is the concept of transformation, the process of turning someone into a different kind of person, the changes in body and mind that come with it, no matter which way it goes. Yes, I find it hot the idea of turning a nerdy gay dude into a straight dopey jock bro, even a homophobic one, not because of what they become, but from the transformation itself. And let's keep in mind, folks, this is FICTION! DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME! Keep doing your stuff, Orrin. And get an armour. Arrows always come when you step out of the safe zone. Good luck!
AMan
7/1/16, 8:33 PM
Nice bate fuel -- I bated all the way thru it. Thanks.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:26 PM
liked want to see where goes, like idea to "transform?' the jock, get why he might not appreciate his dad leaving his mother, wouild be great to see him understand his dad's bravery as "improves"
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:20 PM
Awesome story. Love the underwear and twink changes! Maybe some feminization next time.