Recent Comments

AMan
7/1/16, 8:33 PM
Nice bate fuel -- I bated all the way thru it. Thanks.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:26 PM
liked want to see where goes, like idea to "transform?' the jock, get why he might not appreciate his dad leaving his mother, wouild be great to see him understand his dad's bravery as "improves"
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:20 PM
Awesome story. Love the underwear and twink changes! Maybe some feminization next time.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:17 PM
Excellent Story! I should NOT have read this at work...my briefs are SOAKED.
xORRiNx
7/1/16, 7:14 PM
This is written well! I very much enjoyed the gradual dumb-down and the gradual increase in horniness. :)
Sieg
7/1/16, 7:01 PM
I'm just glad I could make a few people happy with my story! Was my first attempt, so I love hearing feedback!
7/1/16, 6:18 PM
Really enjoyed both chapters of your story so far. The whole "out of sight, out of mind" side effect of the lamp is interesting and well done. It opens up a lot of different things you can do with the plot, if you are so inclined.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 5:28 PM
Good job Orrin Brody has a good dad
Anonymous
7/1/16, 4:18 PM
you're the best
Anonymous
7/1/16, 3:07 PM
Wow, if this artist can barely handle critique, he shouldn't be an artist! The story was great though, and very well written. It also did...appeal to the imagination.