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Jun 28, 2016
Titan
7/1/16, 3:00 AM
Very good. Excellent and well done. Would love a part 2.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 2:49 AM
Wow this is fucking hot so worth the wait.
Magus
7/1/16, 2:25 AM
Oooooohhhh yeaaaaaaah a new story from Baralai. I haven't even read it yet but consider this my thumbs up!
Anonymous
7/1/16, 1:53 AM
If the story touches a theme you don't like, don't read it then. It's pointless to read and then complain about a story with themes you don't like, just skip it. Descriptions and tags are there for a reason. Criticizing a theme is different from criticizing a story.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 1:33 AM
So much fun! :)
Anonymous
7/1/16, 12:41 AM
OMG I CANT BELIEVE THE LONG AWAITED SEQUEK IS HERE
Anonymous
7/1/16, 12:40 AM
Amazing
Anonymous
7/1/16, 12:33 AM
Amazing, as always, Baralai
Anonymous
6/30/16, 10:58 PM
Just spectacular...thanks
tomozco
6/30/16, 9:17 PM
Three thumbs up for you, Edlam! The wait was well worth it and you have not disappointed your followers here...myself included! ;) I think you've got quite a bit of talent in writing and storytelling, as your success on this site would suggest already. Don't let this talent slip away. At the same time, work hard and wish you a great start to your nursing career! I'm interested to see what's in store for the rest of the police force, and if there is more action for Bradley the new guy. The dark side of Prof Simons is also intriguing. Now I'll patiently stand by for Chapter 9!