Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/30/16, 1:49 PM
It's been fascinating to see how your story has been developing. Although the initial episodes are very exciting because the reader is discovering the efficacy of the Re-Educator, I have to say this chapter is probably the best, not because of the continuing use of the device (I said before that simply repeating what happens gets boring no matter what people are made to do), but because you've laid the framework for several concurrent threads which are now coalescing and presumably will come together in one showdown. I'm sorry you didn't introduce or briefly mention Professor Simons in chapter 1, and although anyone could presume that Alex's family was dysfunctional, a specific mention would have been nice so that this upcoming denouement doesn't seem forced - you can always go back and revise to make characters' appearances more organic. You obviously have a talent for this. Perhaps you can combine nursing with narrative writing? Good luck in both fields!
Anonymous
6/30/16, 11:50 AM
^^ what's the point of the negativity though? How does an author improve by you saying "meh I don't like this?"
Anonymous
6/30/16, 10:54 AM
Give that professor a protector of mind control or something. Please do punish Alex
Anonymous
6/30/16, 10:53 AM
:)it's like my mind is polluted Please do give Alex a bad ending or my personal value will be broken
Anonymous
6/30/16, 9:49 AM
I love you, EdIam!
Anonymous
6/30/16, 7:35 AM
Meh, sorry author, still not into the straight shit. Apparently that makes me a whiner, hater and a bully, so sorry for that too, I guess. I think you all need to reign it in a little bit. People are allowed to like or dislike the story and express as much. Believe it or not, that's what the comment section is for... not getting into shitfights with other commenters.
TimNJ
6/30/16, 6:15 AM
I'm liking the comments more than the story itself.
Jun 11, 2016
Anonymous
6/30/16, 6:10 AM
you write the hottest stories on this site. keep up the great work!
Anonymous
6/30/16, 6:04 AM
It's too evil I found it guilty to watch it ;( But I'm hard like rocks
Anonymous
6/30/16, 5:57 AM
i knew it XD