Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/29/16, 8:39 PM
I forgot to say it, but Frank's backstory and the scene with his family is really touching! You rarely see something touching on this website, it is a pleasent touch. And about Professor Simons... he gives me a bad feeling. You made him sound like he's hiding something dark and twisted under the surface.
Anonymous
6/29/16, 7:13 PM
=D
Jun 28, 2016
6/29/16, 6:23 PM
Dislike does not equal hate, but inarticulate dislike is useless. "This sucked" is lousy feedback because it does not specify things that could be improved. Compare "This sucked" with "The characters are too thin and X was unrealistic even for a fantasy because...". Also, it helps a lot if people say what they liked about a story as well: it highlights matters of taste and it's nice to hear positive things too. If we make a habit of harsh criticism and drive budding delightful perverts away, we're poorer for it. I've written a few stories (and intend to write more when time allows) and the generally constructive commenting culture had a lot to do with my decision to bring my work here. I don't think I'm the only one.
Jun 28, 2016
Anonymous
6/29/16, 6:19 PM
There is something about fat guys that get me going...write more 😊
Anonymous
6/29/16, 4:41 PM
Omg after reading through the entire thing i cant even handle the wait for the next chapter
6/29/16, 4:09 PM
Thanks for the feedback, guys! Just going through occasionally and editing the spelling and grammatical errors that I missed last night in my tired stupor. I'm glad you all seem to enjoy where this is going. It's great to have this outlet again...I feel dumb having put it off for so long! I'll continue to edit it where I find little mistakes, but until then, I have Chapter 9 to get to!
Anonymous
6/29/16, 3:55 PM
Would be so hot for one of Alex's commands to be interpreted the wrong way and a follower turned into an accidental dominant who controls Alex....
Anonymous
6/29/16, 3:47 PM
Nice twists. The names you came up for the cops was original.
johnox
6/29/16, 3:37 PM
Superb - another commentator said he got hard. I shot my wad... Enough said. Alex has as much attraction as you could get for an anti-hero - so very dangerous but oozing testosterone from every pore. Of course he's been turned gay himself and that colours one's perception of his supremacy. I'm sure you'll steer the story eventually to a fantastic climax (a gushing one in my case...).
Anonymous
6/29/16, 1:42 PM
OMG I'm starting to think that this is a hypno modern version of GOT with the twists and turns great job, but now I don't who I should be rooting for Alex or Professor Simons.