Recent Comments

8/21/24, 4:37 AM
You never know where the spy game will take Marco next…
8/21/24, 3:11 AM
I am still loving this one. Keep cumming back for more.
8/18/24, 10:43 PM
Very interesting although I am curious to see how it connects to a form of mind control as he already seems to like suits and close to acting on them. However that itself can be where the mind control comes in or just is what helps him ease into his role more so when he has issues regarding the job maybe once he starts like working long hours, tasks he's being asked to do not fitting with the description and so forth. The possibility has potential but can also see how so far this falls into the fetish category over mind control.

Anonymous
8/19/24, 3:33 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Thanks for your comments! I was actually contemplating if I should start him off disliking suits or not. That’s right, I’m planning to help him ease into his submissive side more. I’m thinking of doing a little more mind control later.

Anonymous
8/21/24, 2:09 AM
@Anonymous The mind control can coincide with the submissiveness … if your main character is the kind who built himself up from nothing, using hypnosis to subdue his drive and confidence is irrelevant to his suit fetish (love this btw please keep going!)
8/17/24, 3:32 AM
Loved loved loved it 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫 🥵🥵🥵 hehe Gonna be cheeky and say that there is usually a Halloween theme contest in October . Was wondering you would consider doing a Halloween story like a ghost Or vampire , demon , warlock , or aliens using the same themes you use these stories ( shoes socks body etc 😳😳😳 I feel like it it would be so hot 🥵 in the mean time loving this story Hope there is more . 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

Anonymous
8/17/24, 2:26 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) I like your use of emojis.

8/17/24, 5:15 PM
@Anonymous Thanks 😳

8/18/24, 1:55 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Very happy to hear :grin: A Halloween story sounds fun, although I'm not sure how socks, sneakers and such would mix with vampires or demons :sweat_smile: I'll definitely think about it!! And as for this story, I think it might end up being quite long, it's very fun to write :stuck_out_tongue:

8/18/24, 3:48 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Ooooo sounds like this story is far from finished 🥵🥵🥵 that’s awesome . As for a Halloween story . I Did have a bit of an idea , don’t know if it would help . Could be a few friends / staying somewhere , there is a ghost or entity they can’t see him But there can smell when he takes his sneakers off and the ghost captures the friends one by one , making them sniff his ghostly sneakers they can’t see etc and he takes their shoes off wanks them off with it . Then drinks it . The idea is each time he drinks a victim he takes their life force turning them into his devoted slaves and brings him closer and closer to being back / being seen . He could use captured ones to restrain others etc . Eventually getting them all 😳😳

8/20/24, 1:54 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) That's a really fun and hot idea! Maybe you should write the story? Since you already have a great idea for the plot. I like it a lot!! :grin:

8/20/24, 5:08 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) I’m not very good at writing 😳 I can think of the basic ideas easy enough but that’s about it .

8/21/24, 2:00 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) Alright then, we'll see what the Halloween challenge will be :blush:
8/21/24, 1:31 AM
This is fantastic. I cannot wait to read more. You did a great job. No notes.
8/20/24, 7:23 PM
Very hot!!! Can't wait so see the Spiral controlling everyone!:heart_eyes:

8/20/24, 11:13 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks for the comment!! That's definitely going to happen in the final chapter, but there are some scenes like that coming up over this Game Day series so be on the lookout for them and let me know if you enjoy them.
8/20/24, 10:41 PM
I'm leaving this one open for y'all to add your own stories! In a gym with an endless supply of studly athletes and leather daddies, I trust y'all can make some fun and sexy stories!
Jack
8/20/24, 10:03 PM
I stumbled across this story today and it's seriously, unfairly hot! Even if you don't write more of these two (which you absolutely should), this one story is immediately going into my favorites
8/20/24, 8:30 PM
My favorite story right now! Love the addition of shaving and chastity and the mind games are so hot
Anonymous
8/20/24, 8:17 PM
Another incredible instalment, so unbelievably hot! I secretly wish he’d fail all these games but hopefully in the end he’ll end up equally slutty! Amazing work!