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Tox
6/30/16, 12:17 AM
Or perhaps implement community moderation of comments, that way he doesn't have to do them all himself, I can only imagine from the comment thread here alone that it's quite a lot. But definitely, a process of comment moderation would be beneficial. Orrin, It's great to see that you've decided to stay with us after all! Writing is an art, and as with any art, you'll have some haters, don't let them get to you man. :D You are really good at painting a picture using words :P
Anonymous
6/29/16, 11:42 PM
a tall black man with the tightest uniform Alex had ever seen and a slightly shorter handsome looking red head with a moustache walked around the corner ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Oh my! They look so hot!!! We need more descriptions of them!
Anonymous
6/29/16, 10:00 PM
Demented professor needs to give Alex some schoolin'.
Jun 28, 2016
Anonymous
6/29/16, 9:39 PM
Viridian, I couldn’t agree more. You are excellent.
Anonymous
6/29/16, 9:35 PM
You are conclusively good at depicting a small number of people ... those previous chapters to me are really inviting ... but with so many new characters introduced in this chapter ... How will you handle that later? Depict each one as clearly as you did before? I am really curious. If you make it (Let's expect a HUGER coming chapter), you really are my idol. Good luck.
Anonymous
6/29/16, 9:22 PM
Eigh's works are really amazing. But it is so sad that we have heard from his recently ... actually he didn't show up for years! Where is he? Where is the brilliant writer! Are you well? I really want the sequel to the Tobias ...
Anonymous
6/29/16, 9:18 PM
my love, tomozco! What a great writer! You deserve more! Want other cops' bare feet?
Anonymous
6/29/16, 9:05 PM
1/17-6/28, or five months, or the phenomenal success readers so richly deserve
Anonymous
6/29/16, 9:01 PM
EdIam, you did well. Thanks for the next chapter. We wish you good luck!
Anonymous
6/29/16, 8:54 PM
Oh my. I am dreaming, right! You are the sexiest writer in the world, EdIam! This marvelous chapter! With more characters! With more cops! With more brothers! And with more in the next chapter! Yet more organized! Now we finally can picture somehow the ending. Though I think there will be more twists, right! Now I think even the potential fact that it is Alex that wins at the end against the professor and Eric is not that meaningless, too! I love cops. Thanks for giving me such a wonderful chapter. You completes my life, as a faithful reader! I have more momentum to live on my life!