Recent Comments

6/28/16, 11:55 PM
Don't stop posting Orrin! Your stories are amazing. Ignore the whiners! Not a fan of the whole gay-to-straight, but the tags AND the short summary AND your own warnings are pretty 'straight'forward. (Still read and loved this story so far though!) So those who read it and are bothered by it... That's like deliberately eating a bar of soap and impeach the manufacturer because you've got stomach cramps... And there have been other stories where a gay was turned straight (even if it was just temporary) so I honestly don't get why everyone is giving especially you such a hard time for something that has been featured on this site (and the previous site) before... Some are just plainly bullying you and I hate to see how they are starting to get to you! Please don't let them! You've got a lot of fans here! Don't forget that! Don't let those pathetic anonymous bullies win! I really realy hope to see more of your stories on this site !!! Looking forward to the next part and the mentioned short!!
6/28/16, 10:42 PM
The poster above, I think you have some misgivings on the kind of man Zach is without Fashaad's influence...
Anonymous
6/28/16, 10:37 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter! Make Brendan and Zach fall in love with each other. Zach introduces Brendan to the gay world (and maybe some leather) while Brendan helps him become a better man. Of course, the genie makes some adjustments here and there :)
BostonSatyr
6/28/16, 10:04 PM
I love this story. It's unpredictable and compelling. Rewarding & enticing. I really must compliment you on your creativity. More!!
xORRiNx
6/28/16, 9:58 PM
*sigh. I'm just done... Fuck it. I'll post my stories to my patreon from now on.
Sieg
6/28/16, 9:54 PM
Just in response to one comment about the anon comments...the site uses cookies to identify people who are posting and or reading the stories. Although the authors won't know you by username, you aren't completely anonymous when you decide to post on the site. That being said people can and will flame stories given half a chance. I think Orrin is pushing outside the box with stories that I like for their originality. It's too often that we come across about 30 variations of the same story on this site, so I love reading new content. Furthermore, the original site (before it shut down) was Narcissus Cursed Men's Collection. I believe the premise being an arrogant man, who was full of himself became cursed in a fitting manner to his crime of vanity. If that was the premise behind the majority of the stories, it only stands to reason an extremely vain, and somewhat hateful Ty, would be cursed into what he hates most...a dumb breeder jock. Lastly, I'd point out most writers love constructive criticism, and always seek to improve their work. I don't think Orrin is the exception, but I also don't think most the flaming comments on here would be constructive either.
A San Francisco Reader
6/28/16, 9:20 PM
Sorry to hear that Orrin doesn't want to develop this into a homophobic jock story, because I think that's what's needed here....Many gay readers don't want to admit-it, but stories dealing with homophobic Bully's can be a big 'turn-on', even though some readers consider them politically incorrect....Here's hoping the author will consider this angle in one of his future stories.....
Redbird
6/28/16, 9:02 PM
I agree nice story .
Jun 28, 2016
Anonymous
6/28/16, 8:50 PM
Hot hot hot!
TimNJ
6/28/16, 8:39 PM
Ok, now after reading the author's responses i am doubling down on my above True Detective comment. As with that show, the guy who created the series seemed to take every negative critique about the first season and double down on them, resulting in the quite disastrous second season. So therefore some authors welcome suggestions from readers and incorporate them into their stories. And some do not. Of course it is fine either way, that goes without saying. As I said earlier, gay-to-straight stories, especially, long pretentiously written ones, are not my thing. If others like them, then enjoy!