Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/29/16, 5:14 AM
Ok, let's gain a little perspective here... There have been several small critiques in this thread, as in previous threads, about the theme of this story, straight sex in stories on a site with predominantly gay readership, the author's writing style, etc. Just acknowledge the criticisms as criticisms and move on. Nobody needs the melodrama of threatening to quit writing every time (except for those who pay me on patreon wink wink) and all this ranting about "anonymous haters" voicing their opinions. As others said, you are "pushing the envelope" by offering stories with themes that are frankly a little upsetting to some readers. If you push the envelope, you will receive criticism.
Jun 24, 2016
Anonymous
6/29/16, 5:10 AM
Damn!! This was a great story.
Anonymous
6/29/16, 5:09 AM
Dear Author Write to please yourself. It's like the TV or anything other digital entertainment venue.If the reader/viewer doesn't like, they can turn it off. Keep writing. Remember, Michelangelo was told he could not paint. The Sistine Chapel proved everyone wrong.
xORRiNx
6/29/16, 5:04 AM
I was having a particularly stressful night at work when I wrote my earlier comment about leaving. I'm better now!
Anonymous
6/29/16, 5:03 AM
This was . . . different!!
6/29/16, 5:02 AM
You are all amazing...thank you for your kind words of support and understanding. I'm feeling MUCH more confident about my next go around! It's a touch test, but I got it this time. I take it at the tail end of July, but, with my renewed confidence and free time, I actually sat down today and worked on the next chapter A LOT. I'm up to about 8,000 words to make up for everything, so it'll be an epic chapter. I know where I want this chapter to end and I'm not QUITE to it, but I'm staying up tonight because I'm in the zone. Hopefully, we'll get this knocked out!! Thanks ALL of you for your patience, understanding, and awesomeness. The bully will be back very shortly.
Jun 28, 2016
Anonymous
6/29/16, 5:02 AM
The only thing hot was the bath water!!
Anonymous
6/29/16, 4:50 AM
Your stories always get me off please don't stop posting! I check for new stories everyday and if one of them is yours I know right away that Im gonna have fun ;3. (Typing with one hand right now other sticky from this story xD)
Tox
6/29/16, 4:44 AM
NOOOOOOOOO! Please don't leave Orrin, your stories have been absolutely amazing, its not as though the stories are forced down their throats. They CAN choose not to open the links. I agree with the anon above me, If the story bugs you, or you know the content will bug you (seriously, description and tags exist for a reason, use them people), just don't open it, no one is forcing you to click it. It may not be your thing, but that doesn't mean it isn't someone else's.
Jun 28, 2016
Anonymous
6/29/16, 4:40 AM
So hot!!! Please make a part 2!!!!!! ;D