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Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 5:04 PM
What a great original story here Lost it with the you won't be needing one of these anymore I hope our writer continues with this or other stories like it
Anonymous
6/27/16, 11:00 AM
I love the dumbing down! For me (and many others) it's one of the most erotic parts!
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 10:48 AM
I desperately want to see more like this. The description of Matt was on-point, but Liam's own seemed vague, almost ghostly. I would love to hear more describing his transformation into a bottom boy for his top daddy.Especially more on the mental changes, like his lowered intelligence.
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 10:04 AM
I agree with both of the above comments......your fat descriptions were joyously decadent but I too found a vagueness in the transformation.
Anonymous
6/27/16, 8:07 AM
Wow, really cool, hot, and original transformation method! Love this series, keep up the good work!
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 6:46 AM
WOW!! Fantastic! I must say I disagree with the previous comment, I think that your descriptions about cellulitic asses and flabby bodies are quite good (however, the descriptions are always appreciated!). I would have loved to read about the new Liam wearing women’s underwear, to be totally "decadent and obscene". There will be a sequel? I hope you're planning a series around those mysterious mushrooms! Would be good if you turn their lifes into a grotesque, fat parodies of their former selfs... or if they invite new characters to eat the mushrooms.
Jun 26, 2016
6/27/16, 6:00 AM
This was really hot. I'd love to see a bit more specific descriptions. Some things were somewhat vague which hampered the mental image.
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 5:41 AM
love it! hope to see more of your writing soon
Anonymous
6/27/16, 2:16 AM
Loved the part when only a male figure in a cocoon is seen a nothing inside the rubber suit awaiting to be called upon Great writing
Anonymous
6/27/16, 1:15 AM
My favourite chapter!!!! Oh, man, this is full of good descriptions and hot action. I love Sean's transformation and how all the equipment on his utility belt was replaced for sex toys.