Recent Comments

Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 10:04 AM
I agree with both of the above comments......your fat descriptions were joyously decadent but I too found a vagueness in the transformation.
Anonymous
6/27/16, 8:07 AM
Wow, really cool, hot, and original transformation method! Love this series, keep up the good work!
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 6:46 AM
WOW!! Fantastic! I must say I disagree with the previous comment, I think that your descriptions about cellulitic asses and flabby bodies are quite good (however, the descriptions are always appreciated!). I would have loved to read about the new Liam wearing women’s underwear, to be totally "decadent and obscene". There will be a sequel? I hope you're planning a series around those mysterious mushrooms! Would be good if you turn their lifes into a grotesque, fat parodies of their former selfs... or if they invite new characters to eat the mushrooms.
Jun 26, 2016
6/27/16, 6:00 AM
This was really hot. I'd love to see a bit more specific descriptions. Some things were somewhat vague which hampered the mental image.
Jun 26, 2016
Anonymous
6/27/16, 5:41 AM
love it! hope to see more of your writing soon
Anonymous
6/27/16, 2:16 AM
Loved the part when only a male figure in a cocoon is seen a nothing inside the rubber suit awaiting to be called upon Great writing
Anonymous
6/27/16, 1:15 AM
My favourite chapter!!!! Oh, man, this is full of good descriptions and hot action. I love Sean's transformation and how all the equipment on his utility belt was replaced for sex toys.
LLOYD
6/27/16, 12:41 AM
Oh, for heavens sake enough already. Straight to Gay is already a tag. Straight means it has straight content - not straight characters (most of the stories here have straight characters). So if you don't want to read about straight stuff, and there is a straight tag, just don't read it. That's what the tags are there for. And, respectfully, I disagree that this story - and Orrin's others - are not appropriate to this site. They may not conform to certain readers' particular ideas of what they want to read, but I think they conform to the site's parameters. Do I want to read about a straight guy fucking some chick? Not really. But do I want to read about some straight asshole having his sexuality screwed with and being sexually humiliated? Or having his body changed to humiliate him, and appeal to a particular fetish? Yep! But that's just me...
6/27/16, 12:19 AM
Thanks for this fascinating chapter! Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
6/26/16, 6:58 PM
The tag does seem possibly ambiguous, when you put it like that. A better tag would be "gay to straight" or "straight sex". XOrrinx did put in a pretty unambiguous comment at the beginning tho. Maybe I (the site admin) should add something to make xOrrinx's stories flash amber orange, indicating how dangerous they might be. It is interesting how upset and self-righteous people get on a site that features stories where people are regularly raped. Rape is OK, but mentioned tits and everyone freaks. So funny.