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Jun 24, 2016
Anonymous
6/25/16, 4:38 AM
Now, this was different. Dark and twisted. Good story.
Jun 24, 2016
UchihaDEMS
6/25/16, 1:09 AM
Well, this is original. Not my taste but a good story indeed. About the models, only the priest was handsome hahaha. But, to each his own
Anonymous
6/25/16, 12:46 AM
Speaking of chyoa, I've only read a few stories there, mainly because it's mixed genres and it's harder to find what I want. But I did find a few gay mind control stories. There's one called Dad Quest by Fragman555. Kid gets magic powers and controls his friends and their dads. If I'm allowed to link it, it's here https://chyoa.com/story/Dad-Quest.3237 Just follow the Wizard story option. Warning, contains incest.
Jun 24, 2016
JasCo
6/25/16, 12:32 AM
Wow!
6/24/16, 11:17 PM
Alright, so based on the comments, you'll need to remove cocoa, homophobia, and incest. No useful suggestions from those guys about what they'd like to see instead, I noticed. Seriously, ignore the nitpickers and write whatever you want.
Anonymous
6/24/16, 10:19 PM
Please write more for this it's so good
Jun 24, 2016
Anonymous
6/24/16, 7:16 PM
Great story! One of the most original I've read.
Chyoo
6/24/16, 5:42 PM
Can we everybody here use our imagination and continue this story by ourselves in the different ways we want this continues? For example we can use chyoa . com :) Just an idea..
Anonymous
6/24/16, 9:56 AM
Lost count how many times I got off to this wonderfully bizzare tale, well done and thanks :)
Read only the positive comments
6/24/16, 8:58 AM
Keep up the good work. It's nice to see some variety in terms of content on here. Yeah the site is gay themed content, but there can be a feeling of redundancy sometimes to story structure on here. I think your stories still fit the theme of the site because women play a minor role to the point of non existence, and they discuss themes that are all to familiar with gay culture like bullying. I enjoy reading your stories. I find your imagination and approach to the genre to be original. Keep doing what you're doing and don't let anything stop or change what you want to do creatively. If your stuff isn't someone's cup of tea, then they don't have to read it.