Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/23/16, 2:19 PM
Isn't "straight" right there in the tags? First one? Jesus, some people!
Ragnarok
6/23/16, 7:58 AM
I have read all the comments here so far and I can see and understand both sides of this argument. For it seems that you won't be able please everyone no matter what you decide to do and even though this story wasn't particularly one that I usually go for. I personally hope you don't decide to stop writing because of a little criticism. For if you are discouraged by the split good and bad feedback on your stories on this site, than you could as suggested always post them elsewhere like MCstories, but please don't stop posting them altogether. No one is loved by everyone, so take the good reviews with the bad and try to press on. I will look forward to hopefully more of your works no matter when and where you in the future decide to post them.
Muscledawg
6/23/16, 7:30 AM
I'm gay. Love your stories. If it's too straight for me, I shrug and move on. I'd recommend others do the same. For the sake of their sanity, and yours. ;)
Anonymous
6/23/16, 7:08 AM
Ditto Melvillain! Male TF venues are very limited! Keep up the good work xORRiNx!
cutlerfan
6/23/16, 6:19 AM
xORRIN, please don't stop writing and post your wonderful stories! Write what YOU like and know that there will always be whining trolls. Just ignore them please and continue. I write stories but rarely post them since I had a negative response to a story a while ago. It wasn't at this site. I wish I hadn't gotten so turned off but I did. You are entitled to your emotions. I just don't want to see a great writer leave. Please stay.
Melvillain
6/23/16, 6:17 AM
Heyo,I'm going to weigh in here as a guy who posts on here and a straight TF site. There simply are not a lot of venues for Male TF of this sort outside of sites like this so I hope it's welcome here. Absolutely feel free to express your opinions but I hope this can be a safe space for a spectrum of queer turn-ons. The truth is most straight TF readers are uncomfortable with long, male-specific changes unless it's TG so I really value both Gay Spiral and the previous NCMC incarnation as a place to explore this. Maybe a tag is the way to go but I'm just hopeful generally this community will be open to no homonormative ideas in transformation. It may not always be your bag but experimentation and open mindedness breeds some of the hottest stuff.
Nick
6/23/16, 3:59 AM
Great story! I love the ending!
LLOYD
6/22/16, 9:23 PM
I have taken some heat over the years, on the NCMC in particular, for stories posted that some particular person or people had some particular issue with. The bottom line is that you have to write what YOU like, and hopefully find an audience. You clearly have an audience here. And a gay guy taking down some straight bullies - even if it doesn't result in gay sex - absolutely has a place here on the Gay Spiral Mind Control Story Collection. In my humble opinion. I've said before that even in a story that doesn't perfectly line up with my particular kinks and fetishes, I can often find something to like in it. And if I don't, it's a small loss. I don't like everything about every one of Orrin's stories (and I fervently wish he hadn't abandoned the "Prep to Latino" story), but they are all worth my reading. Thanks, Orrin... LLOYD
Mark
6/22/16, 9:21 PM
Orrin ... haters gonna hate man ... you have a talent for this. Your stories are wonderful, imaginitive, sexy as fuck ... don't let that one idiot dim your lights man ... let it go, he doesn;t know what he talking about anyway. Keep writing and posting man . you have your loyal fans ... that is all that matters.
Corinthianboxer
6/22/16, 9:02 PM
This is a very good piece of writing, thank you very much. Don't take any notice of the negative critics. There will always be one or two, and if they don't like it, no body is forcing them to read it.