Recent Comments

Nick
6/23/16, 3:59 AM
Great story! I love the ending!
LLOYD
6/22/16, 9:23 PM
I have taken some heat over the years, on the NCMC in particular, for stories posted that some particular person or people had some particular issue with. The bottom line is that you have to write what YOU like, and hopefully find an audience. You clearly have an audience here. And a gay guy taking down some straight bullies - even if it doesn't result in gay sex - absolutely has a place here on the Gay Spiral Mind Control Story Collection. In my humble opinion. I've said before that even in a story that doesn't perfectly line up with my particular kinks and fetishes, I can often find something to like in it. And if I don't, it's a small loss. I don't like everything about every one of Orrin's stories (and I fervently wish he hadn't abandoned the "Prep to Latino" story), but they are all worth my reading. Thanks, Orrin... LLOYD
Mark
6/22/16, 9:21 PM
Orrin ... haters gonna hate man ... you have a talent for this. Your stories are wonderful, imaginitive, sexy as fuck ... don't let that one idiot dim your lights man ... let it go, he doesn;t know what he talking about anyway. Keep writing and posting man . you have your loyal fans ... that is all that matters.
Corinthianboxer
6/22/16, 9:02 PM
This is a very good piece of writing, thank you very much. Don't take any notice of the negative critics. There will always be one or two, and if they don't like it, no body is forcing them to read it.
Henry Cavanaugh
6/22/16, 8:42 PM
Keep your chin up, dude. Your stories are some of the best on here and I love the variety between stories whether it's with gay or straight characters. Keep doing you and we'll keep supporting you!
Anonymous
6/22/16, 8:28 PM
Soooo is this story lost?
Anonymous
6/22/16, 8:11 PM
Why do I get the feeling a lot of the people praising orrins straight themed stories are straight. How could you even argue that this site isn't for specifically gay themed stories gay is in the actual name of the site haha. And even though some of the commenters are harsh I can understand why people from the community would be offended when there are so many sites that offer straight themed erotica and so few that offer gay. I don't think anyone actually want orrin to stop writing I think they just want him to post his gay material here and his straight on a more appropriate site for example ncmc .
xORRiNx
6/22/16, 8:03 PM
Thank you for the pep talk everyone!
Chastity Slave
6/22/16, 8:00 PM
Please don't stop writing xORRiNx, love your stories. Your stories are some of my favourite on this site. I love your approach and the variety you produce. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/22/16, 7:36 PM
Orrin, there will always be critics. You write well, and you're stories are refreshing. They frequently aren't cut from the same cloth as the others. I, for one, enjoy reading them, gay OR straight. Don't let the comments of a select few discourage you from either writing or posting. This is a good forum for you and you should continue to post your works here. Should you, however, decide to post elsewhere, please advise where you switch to as I would like to continue following your works. I would like it if you stayed here though. :-)