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Anonymous
6/14/16, 1:09 PM
Hot as hell My greatest appreciation
Anonymous
6/14/16, 1:09 PM
Hot hot hot hot hot!!!
Anonymous
6/14/16, 1:09 PM
Hot hot hot hot hot!!!
Jun 7, 2016
dominican88
6/14/16, 9:59 AM
superhot, really loved the transition! Great job!
Jun 11, 2016
TimNJ
6/14/16, 5:31 AM
Intriguing story! I love it, A LOT. In my own mind, it turns out the original eye doctor did not even have a son, and then the old guy turns up addicted to rent boys and sex.
Jun 13, 2016
Anonymous
6/14/16, 4:45 AM
Great story!! The sense of reality and then, bang!, the simulation was unexpected. Good development. Now, where does the author take this beginning???
Jun 13, 2016
chaz
6/14/16, 4:34 AM
Excellent, one of the hottest stories I've read in a while!
Anonymous
6/14/16, 3:34 AM
Please don't forget about us.
Jun 13, 2016
Anonymous
6/14/16, 2:44 AM
too short! But it's amazing how one can get aroused from your scientific explanation of what's happening. Bravo as always!!
Jun 13, 2016
Anonymous
6/14/16, 1:35 AM
Very creative! I liked the magical growth and the insights into Jeff's self doubt as he finds himself "coming back" once again to the gym. Look at the progress he makes!