Recent Comments

Jun 13, 2016
Anonymous
6/14/16, 4:45 AM
Great story!! The sense of reality and then, bang!, the simulation was unexpected. Good development. Now, where does the author take this beginning???
Jun 13, 2016
chaz
6/14/16, 4:34 AM
Excellent, one of the hottest stories I've read in a while!
Anonymous
6/14/16, 3:34 AM
Please don't forget about us.
Jun 13, 2016
Anonymous
6/14/16, 2:44 AM
too short! But it's amazing how one can get aroused from your scientific explanation of what's happening. Bravo as always!!
Jun 13, 2016
Anonymous
6/14/16, 1:35 AM
Very creative! I liked the magical growth and the insights into Jeff's self doubt as he finds himself "coming back" once again to the gym. Look at the progress he makes!
Jun 13, 2016
cutlerfan
6/14/16, 12:54 AM
Good story. matches the pic perfectly.
xORRiNx
6/13/16, 10:17 PM
I'm trying to get part 4 finished tonight!
Anonymous
6/13/16, 1:54 PM
would like to see this story continue
Anonymous
6/13/16, 12:40 PM
loved it
Anonymous
6/13/16, 12:19 PM
Adding a rugby team would be nice