Recent Comments

Jun 12, 2016
6/12/16, 7:02 PM
This a good story. I love the misdirection and the ending. (And yes, it's been an excellent week here. So many great stories, including this one).
Jun 12, 2016
JamieTi684
6/12/16, 6:07 PM
Amazing story! Hope you keep writing! Heh, it's been a great week for the NCMC, eh lads?
Blufur1@comcast.net
6/12/16, 4:32 PM
Great story with a good twist at the end...
Anonymous
6/12/16, 3:59 PM
Was hoping and glad to see the genie won this one James will enjoy his wishes now
Jun 11, 2016
Anonymous
6/12/16, 3:45 PM
Have an eye exam planned soon hope I don't show how much I liked this story
Anonymous
6/12/16, 3:42 PM
Sad also to see it end and a reason for Justins actions would have been nice I envisioned the more cum piglet absorbs the pudgier he will get And is not really pathetic to be a cum dump lol
6/12/16, 3:38 PM
Great ending to a great story!
Jun 12, 2016
Anonymous
6/12/16, 2:34 PM
:-? Happy story! And well written!
Anonymous
6/12/16, 2:06 PM
More of an explanation for Justin's motivation would have added to the horror. For example, if Brad had unknowingly destroyed Justin's family years ago, and Justin schemed to get revenge, using gypsy magic, that would have made the story more interesting. The mental changes are the best part of stories like this. The extensive description of humiliating changes gets old after a while and the reader starts to feel sorry for the villain. What would balance this out if Brad did some really despicable things, like short some investments that cost people their life's savings or something like that. Then his comeuppance would be more satisfying. As written, I agree with the other posters who said that it was a shame for him to lose his muscled body. That's what made him an exciting villain - the potential for violence. Now he's just a pathetic cum dump.
Anonymous
6/12/16, 1:54 PM
As punishment for greedy Wall Streeters, this is like a permanent jail!