Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/10/16, 1:17 PM
Yes it was awesome but kinda hoping for a different ending with Mr Ames and Miles
Anonymous
6/10/16, 10:29 AM
This was awesome
VRL
6/10/16, 9:42 AM
i love your story Mr./Mrs./Ms. KKA
pyrohelio
6/10/16, 8:40 AM
can you find a pic of someone you imagine this guy turned out looking like?
Anonymous
6/10/16, 4:39 AM
Twisted story line! As usual. Loved it. Love all your stuff.
xORRiNx
6/10/16, 1:59 AM
Thank you! It's funny by the time I was finished writing this I found myself attracted to hairy blonde guys.
dimwittedbrah
6/10/16, 1:07 AM
Just when I think you can't get any better, bro, you churn out this piece of gold! Bust a nut three times reading this - probably the hottest story I've ever read on the site. Peace, man.
KKA
6/10/16, 12:13 AM
;) thats the idea. Makes it so you can't help yourself. But careful it's contagious.
Anonymous
6/10/16, 12:09 AM
So fucking hot. The curse has me horny as hell now!
GrowingGeek
6/9/16, 10:10 PM
It's a really good story - and that's true whether it was a first attempt or something from a seasoned pro, you should be proud! In my view one thing that would make it even better would be to think about your word choice when you edit. The word 'definitely' comes up 37 times in this story, and in a lot of cases you could replace it or lose it entirely. As a reader i got a little hung up towards the end where it's used five times in one paragraph. So I'd suggest using a bit more varied language in future - and i hope you do carry on because you're obviously talented and I'm interested to see where it goes! Great job