Recent Comments

Kka
6/9/16, 1:51 PM
Just revised the writing. Added a little here and there. But yes. Going to be adding a second chapter very soon!!
6/9/16, 1:25 PM
For a first story this is pretty good. Ready for wish #2
hoodedcub
6/9/16, 10:40 AM
Does he become cut or uncut? I would love to know!
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:52 AM
Very hot. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:30 AM
this was extremely epic!!! i was so disappointed u didnt continue it... but im glad you are revisiting it.. please add more... this was and is one of my favorites since this site was ncmc
JamieTi684
6/9/16, 9:20 AM
Awesome story! I love stories from the POV of the top, and a dom one at that, there's very few of them. I think everyone's first story makes them a bit nervous and stressed out, but your writing and grammar are fantastic and can only improve. Can't wait to see more!
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:10 AM
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JasCo
6/9/16, 7:43 AM
New or old, this is gold.
Anonymous
6/9/16, 7:19 AM
Did you rework this? It seems like the first chapter that you posted without anything new added or changed.
Titan
6/9/16, 5:36 AM
Great storyline. 😜 Can't wait to see where you take this. Thanks for your contribution.