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GrowingGeek
6/9/16, 10:10 PM
It's a really good story - and that's true whether it was a first attempt or something from a seasoned pro, you should be proud! In my view one thing that would make it even better would be to think about your word choice when you edit. The word 'definitely' comes up 37 times in this story, and in a lot of cases you could replace it or lose it entirely. As a reader i got a little hung up towards the end where it's used five times in one paragraph. So I'd suggest using a bit more varied language in future - and i hope you do carry on because you're obviously talented and I'm interested to see where it goes! Great job
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:54 PM
I would not like anything, also because when they do these transformations stereotypes always resort to the Turkish or Arab or blonde enough !!!!! I get tired and want to see more other styles such as eg. Native Americans beautiful and muscular but also because no divine Chinese ... and a great bealdad .. .if. I do not like this kind of transformation ... because I belong to that kind of race ... and I do not like to see me that way makes me feel uncomfortable and bad. I became Vasectomy and have no children. I prefer that Americans and Mexican natives play, and also the Chinese because they always turn out to be better !!! With Vasectomy I'll agree now and forever.
njbiguy
6/9/16, 5:54 PM
Hooded cub saw this like I did as the transformation continues shamir has to have gay sex and his existence as a cock (I envy him ) when a foreskin covers what was once colins head
Anonymous
6/9/16, 5:50 PM
Continue please
6/9/16, 2:00 PM
Really good story, even more so for a first. You've written some really great descriptions of the narrator's body and you managed to convey his character well. I love that he's a little shy but then flips to dominating Mickey when they get started. Very hot. I'm definitely looking forward to part 2.
Kka
6/9/16, 1:51 PM
Just revised the writing. Added a little here and there. But yes. Going to be adding a second chapter very soon!!
6/9/16, 1:25 PM
For a first story this is pretty good. Ready for wish #2
hoodedcub
6/9/16, 10:40 AM
Does he become cut or uncut? I would love to know!
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:52 AM
Very hot. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:30 AM
this was extremely epic!!! i was so disappointed u didnt continue it... but im glad you are revisiting it.. please add more... this was and is one of my favorites since this site was ncmc