Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:54 PM
I would not like anything, also because when they do these transformations stereotypes always resort to the Turkish or Arab or blonde enough !!!!! I get tired and want to see more other styles such as eg. Native Americans beautiful and muscular but also because no divine Chinese ... and a great bealdad .. .if. I do not like this kind of transformation ... because I belong to that kind of race ... and I do not like to see me that way makes me feel uncomfortable and bad. I became Vasectomy and have no children. I prefer that Americans and Mexican natives play, and also the Chinese because they always turn out to be better !!! With Vasectomy I'll agree now and forever.
njbiguy
6/9/16, 5:54 PM
Hooded cub saw this like I did as the transformation continues shamir has to have gay sex and his existence as a cock (I envy him ) when a foreskin covers what was once colins head
Anonymous
6/9/16, 5:50 PM
Continue please
6/9/16, 2:00 PM
Really good story, even more so for a first. You've written some really great descriptions of the narrator's body and you managed to convey his character well. I love that he's a little shy but then flips to dominating Mickey when they get started. Very hot. I'm definitely looking forward to part 2.
Kka
6/9/16, 1:51 PM
Just revised the writing. Added a little here and there. But yes. Going to be adding a second chapter very soon!!
6/9/16, 1:25 PM
For a first story this is pretty good. Ready for wish #2
hoodedcub
6/9/16, 10:40 AM
Does he become cut or uncut? I would love to know!
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:52 AM
Very hot. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
6/9/16, 9:30 AM
this was extremely epic!!! i was so disappointed u didnt continue it... but im glad you are revisiting it.. please add more... this was and is one of my favorites since this site was ncmc
JamieTi684
6/9/16, 9:20 AM
Awesome story! I love stories from the POV of the top, and a dom one at that, there's very few of them. I think everyone's first story makes them a bit nervous and stressed out, but your writing and grammar are fantastic and can only improve. Can't wait to see more!