Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/7/16, 11:57 PM
Great story (as usual)! Loved the dumbing down and CTF! My one issue is that I wish it had more and more detailed description of Colin's mental changes, especially towards the end as he more totally became Shamir's dick. Otherwise it was great, keep up the good work!
A San Francisco Reader
6/7/16, 11:10 PM
Still wish that Tom would change depending on who he meets : Would be hot it the next gay guy was super macho & saw Tom as a 'twink' type boi, so that's what he became..including 'shrinkage' & a more 'fem' attitude...[in other words, the speedo's turn him into whatever his latest trick want's him to be !
xORRiNx
6/7/16, 10:56 PM
Thanks guys! I really set out to write a cock TF that was descriptive and visual. I hope it turns at least some people on! @ anonymous: I think Colin is fully Shamir's dick now so he's now bi already. He'll be with anyone! @ San Fran Reader: Thank you! I may tackle that project after I complete some current projects!
Sieg
6/7/16, 10:53 PM
Love the changes! :3 almost seemed like billy was undergoing a similar set of changes, but probably my imagination :p
A San Francisco Reader
6/7/16, 10:48 PM
YOUR JUST A NATURAL BORN 'EROTIC FICTION' WRITER...ALTHOUGH THIS WAS NOT MY FAVORITE STORY BY YOU...NOTHING YOU WRITE IS UNINTERESTING !!! JUST WISH I HAD THE MONEY TO HIRE YOU TO WRITE ME A STORY, BECAUSE YOUR WORK ALWAYS GET'S ME HARD !!! I KNOW IT'S POLITICALLY INCORRECT, BUT I WISH YOU'D CONSIDER A 'HOT' CRUEL BULLY STORY, WHERE PERHAPS A WEAKLING OR SISSY TYPE COMPLETE FAGGOT WAS 'TRANSFORMED' INTO A COMPLETE HOMOPHOBIC 'QUEER HATING' STRAIGHT BULLY, WHILE ONE OF THE 'MACHO' BROS WHO PREVIOUSLY TORMENTED HIM WAS TURNED INTO A COMPLETE 'SISSY', WITH A LISP, LIMP WRIST, MINCING WALK: THE WORKS...AND THE TABLES ARE TURNED !!!
Anonymous
6/7/16, 10:26 PM
Great story Kinda hoping for a follow As Colin becomes Shamirs cock he also becomes the brains And converts Shamir into what Colin desires Much gay sex
Anonymous
6/7/16, 10:13 PM
Awesome chapter 2. Sounds like there will be a chapter 3 too.
6/7/16, 10:10 PM
Great story I too always look forward to your stories, can't wait for more
Henry Cavanaugh
6/7/16, 9:07 PM
Really enjoyed this one, dude! Very different take on the usual story we see here and super refreshing because of it.
Anonymous
6/7/16, 9:05 PM
I'm loving this!